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Wednesday 10 June 2020

My Narrative Writing

Today we had write a narrative this is what i wrote:Years ago dragons traveled around the world.

Having the greatest of adventures. Until mankind was filled with fear thinking that dragons were too dangerous for the world. They opted to bring this species to extinction.
But there was one dragon, a very special dragon that was the king of all dragons and his name was Fangs. Fangs was going to be very special. Even more special then he already was. 

As the struggle for survival became harder and harder for the dragons. the humans discovered a weakness that the dragons had. It was some sort of pison said Fangs, well of course it would be poison, Brenton said Brenton was the best friend of Fangs. They were very close. (Crumble) what was that? Said Fangs i don’t know i think we are being under attack! Shouted Brenton. It had become apparent that the humans had started to attack one of the dragon cities.  And this dragon city just so happens to be the one where Fangs was living at.

So wasting no time they hurried out of there as fast as they could. Fangs was accompanied by two royal dragon Guards Pendragon and Draco along with his Best friend Brenton but unfortunately as they were about to leave the city. Boom! Fangs was hit by one of the poison arrows. All though the poison didn’t kill him instantly they still didn’t know how much time Fangs had left.
But luckily they just barely made it out. 

The poison was still spreading throughout Fangs body they had to act quickly they managed to get most of the poison out but he it turns out the poison gave Fangs a dragon disease that would slowly kill Fangs. Fangs had two weeks to live. Now isn’t the time to be sad Said Fangs they had to move.

Although they did find out that there was a dragon wishing stone. so without a break they headed for the stone. After days they found the stone 1 week and 6 days had passed.  Fangs only had a couple minutes to live. Come on, make a wish to cure you of your disease Brenton said that's what they expected Fangs to wish for but. Instead he wished for a place where all dragons could live in peace his wish was granted and all dragons were free but Fangs was dying he gave up his life to save thousands in his last moments he said goodbye to his friend. 
The End………….  

2 comments:

  1. Wow that is a really dramatic story it was wonderful keep up the outstanding work.

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  2. Talofa Lava Hunter,

    WOW!! I love how you made this story so dramatic. It's so sad how Fangs gave up his life to let all the other dragons have a peaceful life. It's so sad. At least now he can see that all the dragons are save from harm. I can't believe that his friend passed just to get a stone for his friend. I just got one question for you. What kinds of dangers did Brenton face during his adventure to get the Dragon wishing stone. Other than that keep up the outstanding work!!

    Kind regards:

    Mamarei

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