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Thursday 2 May 2019

Narrative writing

Revelations
WALT: follow the structure of a narrative

Start here:In the beginning there were the aether
and the keepers in time they would use the
aether to create a summoning key also an
new element called element 115………….
394857364 years later it was 1939 years after
the battle with unknown heros that welded
four mythical staffs aiding the kingdom.
Dr Ludvig Maxis had created a secret group
called group 935 when they had just found
deposits of element 115 using this new element
they had created things
like the teleportation machine but unfortunately a lot of
there test had failed and the people that went in the
machine were left dead with there bodys looking
indescribable but one test where they tried to
resurrect the failed test subjects they were not
left disappointed it was amazing
they were alive but something
was wrong the test subject attacked
trying to bite them like a zombie but was
shot moments later. Few months later
group 935 were facing money problems as
they could not fund their experiments but
Ludvig Maxis was not gonna give up and turn
to the Nazis for help the Nazis did help but on one
condition that they would give them some undead
soldiers and construct weapons for them so they did.
1947 soldiers were transporting  undead soldiers across
a war field filled with german soldiers. As the were
driving in there truck. Out of nowhere a plane had crashed
into the truck killing the drivers but not the undead soldiers
they had escaped infecting the whole base it was up to
3 survivors left to fend off undead as unlucky as everyone
else they were also unlucky as they were surrounded with
little ammo one by one they had fallen becoming infected.
1948 january 14 a team of 9 were sent to take care of a
problem at the Verrückt asylum finding nothing but the
undead almost everyone in the whole team had died only
4 people were left wasting bullets kill as much as they could
but every had died except for one Tank Dempsey group 935
curious to how he had survived so they taken him back to the
der riese facility and done many test on him. After the many
test that were done on Dempsey he now was in a group with 2
other people their names were Takeo and nikolai they had test
done to them also at the Der Riese facility but something was
wrong one of the failed test subject had escaped infecting every single
person there but because of the few test done on the three they
were completely immune to the virus them but without weapons
how could they defund themselves. After that they did make
out alive with a german scientist but that german scientist was crazy he wanted control he wanted to be a god
Traveling to the moon with a secret base there
switching bodys with the one controlling
the zombies and sending 3 rockets to blow up

the earth. 2025 present day after the events of the
rockets sent to kill every living and undead people on
earth some people were lucky to have made to a nuke
bunker some were not but the attempt to kill the living
dead had failed they should have stayed in the bunkers
because when everyone walk out they were greated to
thousands of zombies thirsty for blood but be mistaken
because this this is just one of universe there are thousands
with this problem the aliens sent deposit of element 115 to
other universes it seemed like the end but no Dempsey Takeo
Nikolai and richtofen set out to save the world fight after fight
after fight detroying the corrupted keepers and the ather they had
one the battle but unfortly Dr monty a god had no idea what to do
with them so sent them to another time line.


The end     



And that was the first part of this story there is a
lot more but this is it hope you enjoyed my narrative
it took for ages to write this ( only 20 mins because had
to correct some stuff)

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